aldervallea-chapterone-rheina's_2

good afternoon, dear readers :)

here is the next of Aldervallea. Finally, I've got some time to continue the story. Today is really a free from activity day, so i can type my idea well.

let's begin reading!

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That’s how I got here. I’ve begged my parents not to send me here but all efforts are useless. I’m here, in Varlexia School. I’ve made up my mind. I’ll adapt here with the country, with the citizens, but not to adapt with the loyal family. So, I don’t live in the loyal castle, but I’m here as a civilians from a faraway village, disguising as a scholarship student and I’m put on one class with the prince who is sitting in front of me now. Nobody knows I’m Rheina, as I changed my name into Rheiya and I completely change my look. I never wear any glasses; I always use soft lenses, so now I need to put on glasses on my face. I desperately have a pony tail which I really hate to have. Hair color isn’t a problem since Alderichia’s loyal family hair has the same color with Valledia’s civilians. The one who knows I’m Rheina is only my elder sister, Narcissa, who has been teaching here for three years. She’s my home room teacher.

Beside the air, I feel a great differentiation between my country and the country I am sitting in right now. It’s my first day in Varlexia School. And in front of my desks, the prince is talking with the other students, and he sits in a chair with a long-straight-hair girl. His hand circles the girl’s shoulder and then he kisses the girl’s chicks, then her lips. They are kissing hotly in front of my eyes, not only me but also people in the class. But no one really care about it, they still act normally. They aren’t shocked at all.

For me, it’s a big thing to be seen, since this is my first time to see people kissing in front of me. But no one but me surprises. Maybe it’s a culture shock. Kissing right in front of the public is not the right thing to do in my country, but it’s normal here. I need to overcome all culture difference to adapt well. And I don’t think I will overcome this culture, since my blood is too conservative to accept those kinds of things.

I look at the prince’s from his back. His silver hair is spiked up and he looks tall. He is the one who my dad said I was going to marry with. But I don’t think he’s a good one. I see him kissing with a girl right in front of me. I don’t want to have such a free husband. Kissing girls around him, I really dislike it.

He notices I’m looking at him. He turns his head and gives me a grin.

“Haven’t seen you around,” he says.

“I’m new here,” I say then I added, “Your Highness.”

He stands up and walks right in front of me.

“You’ve got a nice face,” he says, “you’re pretty.”

“Thanks,” I say.

His hand touches my chic; suddenly he kisses me for some second.

PLAKK!

My right palm lands a hit on his face. He looks at me surprisingly. He might have never thought that he was going to be punched. I wouldn’t have done it if he hadn’t given me that sudden kiss. My hand flew by itself; I just know I’ve punched him.

“Hey! How dare you punch me?” he says surprisingly.

“Why shouldn’t I dare?” I ask him back, “You worth of my punch.”

“You,” he raises his hand but suddenly he stops, “If you were a boy, I’d be happy to finish you off.”

“Sorry, I am a girl,” I says.

“I’ve never met such a girl like you before,” he says, “tell me your name.”

“You don’t need to know mine,” I say.

“The prince tells you so, just tell him your name,” the girl with a straight golden hair says, “Is your chic hurt, your highness?”

“Not that hurt, don’t worry, Louisa. I’m fine. Beside, a punch from a wrecked girl such as her is not hurt enough to be called as ‘painful’,” he says. Again he kisses his girl and then he turns to me, “Well, I don’t know who you are, but you should be grateful that I’m not gonna take any action of what you’ve done to me since you are still freshman. If you dare to do this again, I don’t know what will happen to you.”

I say nothing to his threat. His image in my mind has already been worst, and I bet mine also worst in him. But the fact he doesn’t know that I am his—I don’t want to admit it—fiancé, so my bad image won’t be taken as Alderichia’s princess image, it will be taken as Rheiya’s image. I’ve got no burden then. Even if he knew who I really am, I wouldn’t be a problem. It’d make my private mission to break this forceful engagement had a higher success percentage.

The prince has nothing to say anymore. He’s back to his business with his girl called Louisa. A few minutes have passed, my sister, Narcissa, enters the class. Nothing much changes of her style, only her dress change into teacher’s suit. Narcissa will always be Narcissa with her cold and sharp green eyes.

As she enters the classroom, the noise fades. She smiles at us, the students.

“Good morning, class,” she says.

“Morning,” the students say.

“Well, Caesar, what’s with your swollen face?” she asks the prince, “It’s rare to see your face hurt.”

“It’s nothing,” he says coldly, “A present from the newbie.”

Narcissa grins and looks at me, then looks back to Caesar, “Wow. I’ve never thought you’ll be beaten.”

“I’ve never thought of it too,” Caesar says, “Better you introduce this little monkey girl to us.”

“Caesar!” Narcissa says, “You’re a prince, yet your words aren’t better than a bandit.”

Caesar says nothing. I guess I’ve known why Narcissa is chosen as our homeroom teacher. She’s the only teacher who can bravely shout to Caesar. I bet no other teacher is brave enough to speak a little loud to him. Caesar might drop them out from the school if he isn’t pleased. But he can’t do it to Narcissa since they’re in the same rank. He’s prince and Narcissa’s princess.

“Well, I’m going to introduce the newbie here,” she says, “Now, Rheiya’s if you please coming front.”

I walk to the front and face my new friends.

“Name’s Rheiya, Rheiya Althea. Coming from a small village of western Valleyursh,” I introduce myself.

“So, the little monkey’s named Rheiya,” the prince says aloud, “what a coincidence.”

I stare fiercely at him.

“Coincidence, indeed,” Narcissa says.

I look at her confusedly and she smiles at me. Then she says, “Nothing important. He just realizes that your name has only one different word with his fiancé’s.”

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that's not the end of Rheina's chapter one.

I'll post the remain of it later.

By the way, Chloe will be posted tonight.

Be sure to check this story land :)

thanks!

.angel

aldervallea-chapterone-rheina's_1

people! i decide to post a part of my first chapter of Aldervallea. It is too long so I decided to separate the chapter one.

i don't prepare any translation. No time, and i am a little bit lazy to do it :P

this is the first part of it :)

hope you enjoy :)

Chapter one—Rheina’s view—that country is called Valleyursh

Here I am. In a place, a kingdom I visited about ten year ago. I don’t remember what inside this country because I was only six that time. All I know is one thing. I don’t like this country cold air since I was a little. Something feels bad about the air; it is totally different with the warmth of my country’s air. Well, this country is my country’s best partner ever, we’ve done many relationships which have importance to both country.

I’m going to stay here for a year, doing a kind of what my father called as “relationship” too. Right now, I’m sitting in a class of Valleyursh’s national school, Varlexia School. I act as a new student here from a faraway village of Valleyursh kingdom. Indeed, I’m disguising. That’s the only way to secretly investigate someone by myself without any of his notice. No one should have known that I am the youngest princess of Alderichia, the kingdom of green, sitting here in the middle of a crowded class.

I really object this investigation. Though I’m here now, my heart doesn’t here. My father, King Ingobert, forced me here. I’d love to do all investigation if it’s worth for my kingdom, but not this one. I really don’t want to do this investigation even though my father said it worth for the country as well as my future self. Everything I’m going to investigate is nothing but worse my future. No benefits for me, just for the country itself. It feels like my future is sacrificed.

It was all started on that dinner on a night, three months ago in Advera, capital of my kingdom where the loyal castle is located.

“Just in time,” I said as I was entering the dining hall. My parents, brother and sister had been there. The foods had been served as well as the beverages. But none of them were touched since my father made the rule “We can’t dine in if there’re still some people missing”.

“Here’s the latest,” said my sister, Narcissa.

“Well. At least I come in time,” I said.

“Take your seat, dear,” said my mom.

I took my seat beside my sister.

“Now, we’re complete. We shall dig in then,” said my father.

In the middle of the dinner, my father announced something he thought important to be talked.

“I’ve got an important announcement. I hope you will listen for this carefully, Rheina,” he said.

“I’m listening, Dad,” I said while taking a spoon of soup from my bowl.

“Well. It’s hard for me to say it. You’ll be staying in Vafire for a year,” he said.

“Vafire?” I repeated, “Isn’t it the capital of Valleyursh?”

“Yes, dear,” said my mother, the queen, “you’re staying there.”

“Well. Okay. I guess there is something to do there, eh?” I said, “When will I have to depart?”

“Three months from now you should have arrived at Vafire,” said the king, “There is an important thing to do there. I hope you will cooperate.”

“Rheina, you should calm yourself down, okay?” my brother, Melville, advised me.

“For what?” I asked him back.

“For the thing you are going to hear,” said Narcissa.

“Well. What is it? Seems like you all have known thing that I have to do there,” I said.

“Your only task is to adapt well there,” said my dad.

“Adapt?” I asked, “Well, I will. Of course I will since I’m staying there for a year.”

“Adapt with their citizens and also the family of Valledia,” my mom added.

“Okay. Okay,” I said, “I will.”

“That sounds good. I believe it will make you easier to live in the future,” said my dad.

“What?” I asked, “Live there in the future? What do you mean by it?”

“Oh, you’re such a quick thinker Rheina,” Narcissa praised me.

“Well. I guess this is the right time for you to know that someday you’re going to be Valleyursh’s Queen,” said dad.

“What?” I said.

“You’re going to marry Valleyursh’s prince, Caesar Valledia,” said my mom.

I was surprised and let the spoon fall down accidentally. I couldn’t believe what my mother was saying about. Marry? With Valleyursh’s prince in town, Caesar?

I was too surprised to talk. I couldn’t let a word out from my mouth.

“The purpose we told you to stay there, the real is to know the prince’s personality, to adapt with him,” said my dad, “I will send you there, in one school with the prince.”

“Dad! How come you engaged me with a man?” I said loudly.

“He’s no ordinary man. He’s a prince,” Narcissa corrected.

“Oh, well. Whatever sis. I object to go to Valleyursh. I don’t want to be engaged. I don’t want to be married with someone I don’t even know,” I said.

“You’ll know him. That’s why we send you there,” said my mom.

“Mom, please,” I pleaded, “How can you and dad be so cruel to me?”

“Well, we think it will be good for you and the country,” said dad, “I’m afraid that I accept no objection, Rheina.”

“What… Come on, Dad. You’ll destroy my future,” I said, “How can I get a good, a well future if I don’t love the one who I am going to marry?”

“You’ll love him,” said Narcissa, she giggled.

“What?” I asked her.

“You’ll absolutely love him,” she said it again.

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well. I'll post the other chapter one tomorrow or two days later.

wait up :)

comments are happily accepted.

thanks!

.angel

adervallea-prolog

Here it is. The prologue, the translation will be put under the English :)

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PROLOGUE

Alderichia, the kingdom of green, was once united with Valleyursh, the kingdom of metals. It once called Aldervallea, a great country which was ruled by leader of Chiursh Family. From one generation to its lower generation, the title king always given to the crown prince, which was eldest son of the family. The tradition broke at the 13^th generation of Chiursh Family, it also called as the last generation of Chiursh Family, and the raise of two kingdoms.

King Albernsen, the 12^th king, had no son, but two twin daughter, Myre and Meryll. They both were twins, identically similar with an only difference, their hair. Meryll got her father’s golden hair; Myre got her mother’s silver hair. They was a good siblings, they even got married in the same day. They were married by two men from two country’s protector family, the Alderine and the Valledia family. Meryll was married by the Valledia’s family, and Myre was married by the Alderine’s.

It was hard to decide who will be the next ruler, since there’s no son. The elders of the kingdom gave advice to raise Meryll, the golden haired one, to be the next ruler. Valledia Family surely agreed, but it was objected by the Alderine Family. They believed princess Myre should be the next ruler since she was born out earlier some minutes than her sister. Cold war between Valledia and Alderine family broke. This made the twins annoyed and made a decision: Aldervallea was separated into Alderichia, which was ruled by the heir of Alderine Family and they got more fertile land. The other was Valleyursh, which got more mining production. The odd was happening as the kingdom was separated. People who lived in Alderichia’s territory, had a golden hair as Meryll got, and their ruler hair was as silver as Myre’s. This also happened to Valleyursh’s civilians as they got silver hair and their ruler’s was golden.

Though they were separated, they still had a good relationship because of the two twin princess wouldn’t let one of them suffer. From generation to generation, both countries have made some treaties, business and politics relations, educational relation and the 8^th generation king of both countries, King Ingobert of Alderichia and King Jaderson of Valledia, have already made a secret pact and they both are going to reveal it to the countries.

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It's time for the Indonesian :)

it once a real messed up words from google translation, but i manage to edit it :)

PROLOG

Alderichia, kerajaan hijau, pernah bersatu dengan Valleyursh, kerajaan logam. Dulu disebut Aldervallea, sebuah negara besar yang diperintah oleh pemimpin Keluarga Chiursh. Dari satu generasi ke generasi bawahnya, gelar raja selalu diberikan kepada putra mahkota, yang merupakan sulung putra keluarga. Tradisi terpecah pada generasi ke 13 keluarga Chiursh, yang juga disebut sebagai generasi terakhir dari silsilah keluarga itu, dan menjadi kebangkitan dari dua kerajaan.

Albernsen raja, raja ke-12, tidak memiliki anak laki-laki, tapi dua putri kembar, Myre dan Meryll.Mereka berdua adalah saudara kembar, identik sama dengan perbedaan hanya rambut mereka. Meryll memiliki rambut keemasan ayahnya; Myre mendapatkan rambut perak ibunya. Mereka adalah saudara yang baik, mereka bahkan menikah di hari yang sama.Mereka dinikahi oleh dua orang dari dua negara pelindung keluarga, yang Alderine dan keluarga Valledia.Meryll menikah oleh keluarga Valledia, dan Myre menikah oleh keluarga Alderine.

Sulit untuk memutuskan siapa yang akan menjadi penguasa berikutnya, karena tidak ada anak laki - laki.Para tetua kerajaan memberikan saran untuk meningkatkan Meryll, yang berambut emas, untuk menjadi penguasa berikutnya.Keluarga Valledia pasti setuju, tapi Keluarga Alderine sangat keberatan.Mereka percaya Myre putri harus menjadi penguasa berikutnya secara dia lahir lebih awal beberapa menit dari kakaknya. perang dingin antara Valledia dan keluarga Alderine pecah.Hal ini membuat si kembar jengkel dan membuat keputusan: Aldervallea dipisahkan menjadi Alderichia, yang diperintah oleh pewaris Alderine Keluarga dan mereka mendapat lahan lebih subur.Yang lainnya adalah Valleyursh, yang mendapat produksi pertambangan yang lebih banyak. Yang aneh itu terjadi sebagai kerajaan terpisah. Orang-orang yang tinggal di wilayah Alderichia itu, memiliki rambut emas sebagai Meryll punya, dan rambut pemimpin mereka sebagai perak sebagaimana seperak putri Myre. Hal ini juga terjadi pada warga sipil Valleyursh saat mereka punya rambut perak dan penguasa mereka adalah emas.

Meskipun mereka terpisah, mereka masih memiliki hubungan yang baik karena dua putri kembar tidak akan membiarkan salah satu dari mereka menderita. Dari generasi ke generasi, kedua negara telah membuat beberapa perjanjian, hubungan bisnis dan politik, hubungan pendidikan dan raja generasi ke-8 kedua negara, Raja Ingobert dari Alderichia dan Raja Jaderson dari Valledia, telah membuat perjanjian rahasia dan mereka berdua akanmengungkapkan hal itu kepada negara-negara

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I've tried hard to edit the translation, but it still sucks in the end :(

:)

.angel

aldervallea-intro :)

Okay. Here is the first story I write. Well, I never thought I will post it here and this is not a short story but such a long story. This story hasn’t ended. I’ve written it on a file paper before, and some people, especially my dearest friends, has already read this story. They want me to finish this story, but I haven’t got a perfect epic ending for my story. I’m not gonna post all the story’s chapters, since it has not finished yet. But I’m going to post it one by one. Be patient. Hopefully I can add another chapter every two or three days.

I’ll spoil a little bit of it. Each chapter of this story is divided into two parts, as there’re two points of view, so it means that there’s two main characters here and you’ll see the difference—sometimes similarity—of their thinking ways. I’ll write it like this, example:

Chapter 1—Rheina’s view—Surprising News

And then for the other:

Chapter 1—Caesar’s view—what the…

Well, things like that. So I bet you won’t be confused. I’ll group it as “Aldervallea”. I’ve decided that it, Aldervallea, will be the title. But I'll group it if it is able to be grouped.

By posting my work here, I hope readers can give comments and story suggestion for this one by leaving some comments here, or post it in my facebook’s wall (search:alphaneedhelp@yahoo.com), or just tweet me on my twitter (@angelinaayuu). By the way, I’m still aware of plagiarism. Can anyone tell me how to secure this thing? =(

Oh, yeah. I’ve forgotten to tell people about this. I think I’m gonna post the translation of every chapter. But there’s no guarantee the translation will be good, because I’m going to translate it from English by Google Translator, so no wonder if some sentences are hardly damaged. I still recommend you to read the English one. It’s to practice your English, am I wrong? =D

I act just as I’m a famous writer, eh?

=)

Well, enjoy one of my masterpieces!